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Little girl Big world 2009-08-12 . chapter 1
The rhyme scheme kind of changed from the first stanza just something I noticed but its nothing that takes away from the piece.

I like how you described love as taking over someone.
& Great imagery used in this!

"It soaked my spine,
Between the vertebrae
Through the delicate design." -Great lines!

Wonderfully written!
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