I believe I'm not mistaken in saying that I'd read an earlier version of this, right? That or I'm psychic...Which would be cool. Anyhow, I really enjoyed this shortie. I would love to hear more about the foundation in future stories from this verse. I really like the concept of this short story collection--I'm sure it will get the inspirational thought patterns churning.

that's so sad! but good... and sad... but still good ;) its and interesting story but I'm a little confused about Allen... but thats probably going to be explained later :)