Wow this story is incredibly cute, you had me laughing. I really liked the idea behind it as well. But if anything I think the OC proved geeks can be cute, as Seth Cohen has proved lol. Great story so far.

Okay - Don't get mad, but I liked the story better when I thought Jase was just an arrogant nerd. I thought it made him more interesting. HOWEVER - I intend to keep reading, because whatever he did to his cousin is intriguing. I need to know.

Aaw, nothing about the mysterious cousin. I really liked the first 'date' though. Caroline seems to be starting to like Jason even though he has done nothing but be a "dumb geek". I hear thats what happens when two people are compatible...but no, I won't get too far ahead of myself.:D

So what does Jase think of Cary after this first meething. We know what she thinks but I can't help but wonder what he thinks in that whacked-out brain of his. Jase confuses me but I guess thats the point.

I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it's not as long as a wait but this time of year, who knows. I really like Melody and I hope shes in it a bit more soon. She has the most awesome one-liners.“Ok, how about you make yourself look ugly... wait, you have that part covered!” Classic.

Anyways, love it and hope you update soon! Love Faery Queene.

Gah, dammit. I did it again; favorited a story by accident. Actually, I was going to anyways, just once there were more stories. Oh well, bit early, but okay then.

Melody is composed of awesome; I like her dialogue.

“Ok, how about you make yourself look ugly... wait, you have that part covered!” Melody burst into laughter.
XD

“Why not? You don’t really believe all that shit about you being cool, do you? If so, you should become friends with Jase Hemingway.”
See, look at all these dropping hints; Caroline and Jase are made for each other.

For some reason, I didn't imagine her to look that way. Your character's have pretty versatile appearances.

They're such Star Wars nerds.

'manoeuvre'
It should be maneuver.

Wonder how long it'll take her to realize it's all a cover up and he's not a geek. It's hilarious how she tried getting away from him, and fell head first in his lap.

“Was that a moan of pleasure? But I haven’t even pleasured you yet? You want it already?”
I'm in a happy mood right now, and I can't think of any words, so... Lol.

'Caroline glared at him for a long while before flying at him in a tackle.'
Hmm, that's not far off from what I'd have a character do.

Story conspiracy theory: It's a soap opera, and those aren't her real parents O.o She looks Hispanic, so she's obviously Melody's twin. Obviously.

His glare morphed back into the soft smile, “In that case, you can go up to her, she probably simmered down now. Don’t try anything funny. Or I will break you.” He said the last words menacingly.

Shouldn't it be she's?

'She looked over his cheeky smile, his crossed (and totally in shape) arms, and his perfect white teeth. Maybe Melody was on to something when she said he could’ve been hot.'
I can't deal with another oblivious character. She needs to look up the definition of nerd, then look and compare it to Jase.

Woot for characters in denial. They're fun to write, if anything else. Sadly, it appears she lacks common sense.

Maybe they really did match.
-Sees Melody smugly grinning with arms crossed-

She smacked herself for good measure. A loud smacking sound rang around her room.
Lol. I've always wanted to see a character do that.

What does le midi mean?

It's been a month? Time passes quickly when the sun sets faster.

Nice update, pretty long. I like how you can make your characters all diversified. They all seem individual enough. I still wonder what's the plot, but it's the third chapter. It's hopefully not going to take long to realize he's not a 'dumb geek,' but you never know with the oblivious ones. Oh, and no grammatical errors except one!

Ooh! I like how you turned things around! That was cool! I thought he'd be your typical geek, 'cept with an inflated ego!
It would've been a laugh.
So this whole geek thing has to do with his cousin somehow. Hm. Nice foreshadowing, if I can call it that. The cousin's really funny though. She was all that's too cool! Hahahh. She's awesome. Continue please!

This is really funny! I love it!
It's so different from Silence but it's still so cool!
It might be better because it has me laughing. Jase is hilarious!
He's amazing.

And Caroline's just so cute. Dramatic people are always the interesting ones.

Ooh, I like this! I absolutely love the relationship between Melody and Caroline. They seem exactly like me and my friends; I feel like you've captured friendship very well. I could totally see their conversations happening in real life. And Jase is so amusing, haha. I totally feel bad for him though!

A few things, though: I'm curious as to why Jase didn't think about Caroline at all when we had his p.o.v, especially since, according to Caroline, he now think they're going out. I couldn't really buy Caroline's distress over the issue because Jase didn't think about her at all! I think some acknowledgment about that would go a long way.

Also, right now you basically just have all dialogue. Try describing some of your scenes! It would make for a much better story, believe me.

Good =] but maybe you could go into a bit more detail on the characters appearences as in caroline and melody. i think it would make it more interesting.

Aah. I get it. I read the last chapter after and you've changed it slightly and changed Daniel to Jase. Interesting...so he's not really a nerd. I really didnt expect that. Well that should head this story down a completely different road. Are you planning to make this a long story or a short one? "A loud growl was heard coming from the direction of the broom closet." LOL, I love it. Caroline's dramatic but cute and Melody seems like the most awesome friend, shit-stirrer! OH, I just realised you didnt say the name of the cousin!! Omgsh, who is it? Someone whose life was destroyed by Jase, hm. Cant wait for the next chapter! Love, Faery Queene.

The summary I got in my e-mail... Jase? I didn't know that was his name, unless you changed it.

'melodious', wow. I had to actually think what the dumb 'joke' was.

'“Ahaha! You’re just hilarious,” Melody replied monotonously.'
I really like this line, because I could see it happening. Just 'pause', then 'oh, ahaha.'

'Without the greasy hair, cheap glasses, dorky attitude, stupid belief that he’s “cool”, and ugly clothes,'
Ouch, but Melody's a pretty realistic (as in a good) character.

'Getting rid of him was going to be hard but Caroline could do it.'
Where there's a will there's a way. Second review I think I've said it in (no, I think I read it in another story and almost commented on it). I've been saying this a lot more, if only because I named a chapter after that.

'but she was the one' should be but she wasn't, with the n't.

Whoa, it's like Mr. Jykel and Hyde. One minute he's a dork, and the other it's completely reversed around.

'It was unexpected.' Just because I've got the picture of a dork implanted on 'Jase's' (I put the apostrophes because I thought his name was something different...) name.

Messing with character's is fun. If anything, I think Melody would be the one to find out first. But being the 'very best friend' she is, she's not telling.

It's nice that you decided to make him a complete dork at school, though, otherwise it'd be another cliche to hate.

laughter is running through me at the moment. this brings back memories of the losers that were in my class a couple of years ago.

The first section was just hilarious. I think some people are actually like that. It's the whole 'laugh at you, not with you' thing.

From 'Life is great' to 'MY FUCKING LIFE IS OVER'.

What's puta? A Canadian term?

'“You could at least humour me.”

“I believe in honesty.”

Smack.'
Hilarious.

'“Who the fuck are you?”'
He needs to come back on earth. I can already see it: Step One: Denial; Current. 2. Anger And I can definitely see 3. Bargaining. I can't see him going into Depression.

She gave him a confused look. “Of course, that’s all I want. Anyway, where do you live?”
Another one.

Oh, and no comma is needed after course. But it's speech, so it could work as her pause in conversation, I guess.

Yup, yeah, they laughed AT him.

This story sure is different; they're already going out, and they, as in I mean Caroline, sure doesn't like him.

'“What social life?” Melody asked bluntly.'
Okay, those two totally make a good couple; as in David... no... Daniel! and Caroline.

Hey, I've seen that exact story too. I didn't read it, despite the number of reviews- the A/N: in it stated it was written long ago.

Ah, I know what puta means now.

Looking forward to the next chapter; I had initially disagreed with the fact that Silence is too serious to continue, but if you compare it to this story, then hell yeah.

How awesome! I understand why you wanted to write this so bad, its brilliant. Daniel is like so many boys I know, its funny to read about him and Caroline also reminds me of a few of my friends. Dramatic, so dramatic. Thanks for the Spanish words, I think they will come in handy...lol. More soon please, especially as you said that you have four more chapters written. No excuses...unlike me.

Love Faery Queene, an excited fan who cannot wait for more. The suspense is killing me already!