I think this is rather good poetry. Great imagery is used and I like the kind of repetition from the first stanza in the last stanza. Nice job!

there is something very bitter, but there is also something very justified. it just sounds like the perfect balance of vindictiveness and, well, sadness.

"scheme away because i can scheme too" - my favorite line.

i see no bad poetry here. im pretty much in love your imagery and metaphors.

oh man. i fucking love this.
the imagery, the metaphors, all of it just adds to the piece in the most effective and beautiful way. i love it so much. the feel of the poem, to me, seems jaded in a way, like the narrator is just telling as is without a barrel of emotions to follow behind. i freaking love this. i'm going to look at the rest of your stuff.

i missed this piece before..

i LOVE the imagery here. its fantastic. YAY, i hope this means you've beaten your WB because people with the block don't write lovely like this.

'to paint misery with
prickly brushes into
the darkened sky
and to

stencil in hypocrisy
between the layers'

thats my favorite paragraph in the whole piece. the ending was nice too.

;)

this is beautiful, i relate to it completely, and i love it.