Oh, that is good! I like the use of all the angel names from Christianity and other such, and the prologue-esque section was extremley interesting. I like your sense of humor, which is rather subtle, and the feeling of the story, which is soothing (at this time) and calm and tranquil and peaceful. I have got no criticism to add, me with all my chatty and useless words...

At any right, keep going at it! Luck to you.

Oo- Cherry -oO

I really like this story. You should definitely continue. I saw no problems in this chapter - no typos, nothing. This looks to be a great story in the making and something similar to the one I've been writing for years :) Yours is from a different take on it obviously. I'm not suggesting plagarism or anything :D

Keep up the writing. Its great!!

Col