 Jenna E 2009-06-15 . chapter 1 I really love your use of parentheses, and the rhythm (except in the first two lines (you wanted honesty)), but everywhere else is fantastic. Now, I'm now poetry expert so my opinion really shouldn't count. But I enjoyed it. |
 SilverHawkofEllona21 2008-11-14 . chapter 1This is awesome! One of the best love poems that I've ever read... Actually scratch that. None of the others compare to this one.It reminds me of a song I know a little bit too,so that's what made my day the most about this poem.
Now that I'm done praising, here comes the real reveiw:
Sweet and simple with a hint of irony. (in the fact that they are not in love but keep comming back to eachother)The narrator's feelings shine bright and come acros loud and clear that she is not in love with her partner, but is still atracted to him in a way that draws her in all over again.
Keep up the good work!
~SHOE21 |