That was amazing! I'm almost speechless!

I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my my work. It would mean a lot!

i love this. really i do. you're an amazing poet!

Dare! I really like this and how the game became so personal. favourite line: Over drinks, the need to be small
had wound itself ‘round my wrist

Keep Writing

A POEM! FROM JENNIFER! this is momentous indeed
furthermore, i like it plentifully. most especially :

"Truth, you insisted, truth or
And with uncanny sureness your hands found my hair."

! is all i can say to that and its perfectness :D

the only bit that faltered in my opinion was the "question/descending inflection" - seemed a little forced to my ears.

but the rest! splendide!
you are amazing (L)