hi
lol
this is interesting.
i will read mmore when not so sleepy =]

still reading =]

please get it of your head that you're a bad writer because you're not. i hope you can get a few more chapters up before uni *crosses fingers*

i felt this chapter was a little disjointed. it doesn't feel as "complete" as the other chapters which seemed to focus on a specific event. this one left us hanging...which did create suspense (if that was your intent). thursday's mysterious past and her relationship with fiona draws interest and it's clear that there are secrets she has kept for a long time.

however, i'm having trouble making sense of the last section...a flashback perhaps?

thursday is very intriguing. i think the fact that she has flaws makes her a more likeable character--very different from what was presented in the prologue. Plus, i loved your metaphors: "woodpecker drilling a hole in her head" "ingested a garbage truck and it’s sweaty, smelly drivers" hahahah XD

update soon
[& i want more apple pie...]

hey =]
glad to see you're writing again. interesting concept. am i special enough to get a little peek at what happens next?

I really like the idea behind this-the devil on one shoulder and the angel on the other.
I can't wait to see where you go with this.

This definitely caught my attention. I want to see what kind of assignment Anthea has.
Good job!