aw!
thanks so much for this story!!
haha, wat if, after they do it. and a couple weeks later, she finds out she really IS pregnant or something. like Seth told her mom. XD
maybe a little epilogue? ;P
nevertheless, this story was awesome! thanks so much! :D :D :D

Wow, what an incredible story. I want a Seth, but I don't have an older brother to have hot friends. Darn it.
Good luck with any future writing!

Aw this story was really good!

i i cant stop reading it ive read it about 20 times now lolz

Whoas, very nice! The little devil Seth >>; Lex sounds a little bit like me. I sleep a lot too xD

omg

Great story!

I'll have to read your other stories, I am really enjoying this one.

a thousand exclamation points could not be enough. plus fp has this funny little thing if you put too many of the same character into a review in succession, they cut you down to one. that was so cute. i was squealing so bad.

as a plus, i didn't see many, if any, grammar or spelling errors and i have no idea what your other stories are like, though i've got one bookshelved on my favorites that i will read eventually, so i could care less if this is mediocre fluff by your standards. i loved it.

its a good cliché- i liked the story
charlotte

Wonderful!

:] It makes me happy. These short fluff pieces make me quite happy. I love the simplicity of your writing. It makes me want to come back to these characters again and again, especially now that it's summer. Makes me think about the stories of teenagers on vacations in the summer. There are several. I think I might stay up revisiting those characters. Congrats on yet another. It's been such a long time since I've written. I miss it.

Julie! It's Julia. Remember me? I didn't know you were still writing. When did this happen? I haven't read any sort of romance in at least 4 years. Sometimes I really long for the days when I could appreciate some crappy (not yours, of course) fictionpress writing. I'm so excited to dig into this. I remember the days when I used to lie awake in bed until 3 in the morning reading and rereading your stuff and all the other old stuff back before the influx of new writers came in. Anyways. I'll let you know what I think when I finish, although I'm sure I'll love it. As always.

AWSOME!

I actual freaking loved this story.
Like seriously, so sweet and amazing.
And you have be craving summer like crazy now(I live in Australia, so it is currently winter)
But yes, lovely, nice work.