more please?

hi! i really like your story.
natalie and wyatt is a cute couple.
they're matching.
i still confused what is wyatt doing? an assasin?
or he just like batman. kill the bad guy?
please please update soon.

i freakin love this story XD

Can you upload the original version of The Pantheion? I want to read it again ((: Thanx!

Now that I finally got a grip of myself and am reviewing, I want to say that I simply love this. I read the original one, and I liked it as well, but I think you're doing good work with this. Natalie is a non-annoying character (definite plus!), and it does help you've made me love Wyatt. x)

So keep on with the good work, I can't wait to see what comes up next!

Hey

I like this, I remember reading the original and then giving up on it, but you've improved a lot with this one.

Though I still don't quite understand:

1. How she could so easily accept her fate
2. How she could believe that someone who runs an organisation which aims at cleaning out the city could mercilessly kill her
3. Why no one from her past life, like her boss Harrison or her co-workers or even her neighbours or college/school -mates would recognize her photograph in the newspapers and hence question her new life and background

Hope you update soon!

Hahaha I absolutely love this girl :P


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hey!i love your story but i cant wait for the next update so i wanted to read the original one.. with no redux. but i cant seem to find it. where can i find it? hope to hear from you soon. cant wait to read the whole thing!! :)

GAH!

I am so sorry that it has taken me forever to review. I have been lazy. :(

But, I love how the story is developing. Oh, Adam is going to cause trouble isn't he?

Wyatt and Natalie seem to be getting along better. Amazing job with the tension there. I loved it and can't wait for more!

Update soon!

That was awesome. I really love this rewrite. I just wish i remembered how the first version ended! Oh well. I like the ending of this chapter a lot. Your description of Alice was amazing and hilarious. I would love to meet a woman like that. Good job and update soon!

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Haha!! I love this new Natalie.. She's so funny. I like that you are taking their relationship a little faster. Update soon.

Nice! I love these updates... =P

ha! poor wyatt

I love it ... Babe !

hahahaha i loved the ending! =)