You are very good with using words and forming them into a real message,
the poem sounds almost like song lyrics.
It sounds like it could be the lyrics of a Rise Against song, very good :)

Hey old friend! I couldn't PM you so I'll just drop you a line here in hopes you'll get this. Your writng, as usual, is exceptional. I hope you're doing well in life, and even if right now you're not, know that you're not alone, and it'll get better!

summerdazed

"We see and seek sameness." So true, even with options more plentiful everyone essential wears the same thing and their thoughts are a collective. I think the mention of rose tinted glasses came off a bit cliche. I like the message of this.

Cheers

Truthful and deep as always. I think this would make a very powerful song.