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ForeverinMoonlight 2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Very nice. I especially liked the last two stanzas. You ended it really well. :)
Isca 2008-11-17 . chapter 1
"Hurt hurls in white spaces." Nice alliteration!

"The hollow carving...has been emptied of dreams." Sorrowful imagery!

"I've been bound to your thoughts for so long." Beautiful!

I LOVE THIS! :D
english summer rain 2008-11-17 . chapter 1
goodness, second last stanza grasped my heart and crushed it. you have some talent in making your audience feel something :)
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