 Minigolf 2009-10-30 . chapter 14such a cute story |
 Kayla Brown 2009-07-05 . chapter 14I love it. Please write more!
Love
KAYLA BROWN |
 RoryAceHayden147 2009-05-24 . chapter 14Update asap!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Au Revoir! |
 Jules 2009-05-07 . chapter 14 i hope you don't take this the wrong way. it's not meant to be a bitchy comment, just some constructive criticism. okay. you have a wonderful storyline. i enjoy it, i really do. but darling, your grammer needs some renovating. don't hate me; constructive criticism, remember? i've noticed some spelling errors, run on sentences, and a few other things. i would suggest getting a beta to clean it up. i'm not saying i hate your story, i like it a lot, honestly. it's just that i'm a grammer nazi and poor grammer makes me want to throw something. so clean up the grammer mistakes, and keep on writing because i am really looking forward to finding out what happens. |
 Memona 2009-05-05 . chapter 14 Hi realy like your story :D i have allways been in too vampire storys and like that. This is first time i have started to read something like this:D and i realy liked it... keep up like this:-) please give the next chapter soon |
 WritingWithChocolate 2009-05-03 . chapter 14OMG! THIS WAS SO CUTE! *contented sigh*...Kaci and Ion seem so HAPPY together! i wonder who strangeled Kaci's would-be rapist...does that play a part in the story? |
 oxsarahxo 2009-04-18 . chapter 14:) |
 Gerber 2009-04-17 . chapter 14I can't wait to read what's going to happen next!
Please keep writing :) |
 heidipandabear 2009-04-17 . chapter 14aww...
poor kaci.
i'm totally in love with ion.
he's great.
update soon. |
 kris89 2009-04-17 . chapter 14im a bit confused, what does the fact that kacis power showed up have to do with ions mothers healing potion. |
 Brit Girl 101 2009-04-17 . chapter 14I love this
The chemistry Ion and Kaci have is so (I cant even think of a word that fits) |
 pinkeclipse 2009-04-17 . chapter 14Love it! Thanks! |
 Amphityonis 2009-04-17 . chapter 14aww that is so sweet. i love Ion. he is just adorable. please update soon. i want to see more softness form our great evil bully :P |
 Green Sea Blossom 2009-04-14 . chapter 13I LOVE THIS STORY!(^-^) Can't wait for update! |
 ladi yolie 2009-04-14 . chapter 13 please finish! I NEED IT TO LIVE! JK! i want to know what's going to happen to Kaci and Ion. does Kaci get her revenge? what will happen to Ashi and the FOI |