I really liked this chapter! The perfect combination of sci fi/fantasy, and human emotion. Update soon!!

Very interesting...I don't really get why he's in a different body though. Regardless, a very cool chapter. Update soon!

This chapter was much more clearly written, and I really enjoyed it. :)

Interesting chapter, but again with the confusing issue. A few transitions would make it much easier for the reader to understand. :)

Um wow...that was really confusing. It wasn't clear at all, really. You should go back and add in a few more sentences of explanation. I can't wait to see what you do to make it better! Update soon. :)

Very interesting...I'm so curious!! Update soon. :)

Danielle is a very interesting character...so is Peter. I'm curious to find out the extent of what happened. Great chapter! :)

I really love this prologue. Though it's short, it lays out an excellent base for a story. The characters are already explored a bit, and emotion is well portrayed. Great job. :)