Wow, I took you off my favorite list because, you didn't update for a long time. I look forward to reading :)

i think the story has a very good plot to it,

and if you are worried about grafic's i think it would be good to put jut a little bit more in...and maybe some strugle between marina and brennan's brother..

Cant wait to see what happens next, now that the emperor has died. Keep up the great writing.

Beginning is interesting...

hey that last review was meant for this chapter lol sorry

Hey! ^-^ This is Mae. Though I am no longer Mae I am Maelne. I finally have an account! ^-^ but anyways...The past few chapters seem bereft of emotion. I would like to get inside Marina's head. Know what she is thinking at the exact time that something happens. Her facial expression and what not. And could you please not make her so boring? I mean the only exciting thing that has happened was when her fiance's brother made a move on Marina. I want the fiance to show interest in Marina and protectiveness.

your welcome ^-^ I look forward to the chapters to come.

I like it but could you please please please please PLEASE write longer entries! It is killing me! And give more detail on how Marina's life is and what others are thinking, and what specifically she does with her time and all that. And please please please some romance or talk between her and Brennen? I mean she's getting married to him and yet they've shared one glance, at which said nothing as to how Brennen's blush made her feel, and a few words. Maybe even one shared thought. Please put more detail and romance and meaning into this. I seems bereft of any emotion. I want to know what she is thinking and mica and Theresa and defintely Brennen and all the others. Even if it's a thought or two. I mean Marina is the main character and yet I feel I don't know anything about her. She seems like a robot who does anything she's told to do.

I love this! ^-^ Please write more

Oh ^_^ Please write more soon!