The first line of every stanza is brilliant! :)

I really like this, it's what I have felt before and so hard to put it into words sometimes, but you did it! (For the most part.) You were right that some of the lines are a little awkward, but it will come to you.

hey. i could log in, but im lazy.
that was good. you didnt do to bad making the lines work, but there were some run-ons. (of course, im one to comment on that. not!) anyway, if you go in and add a comma or two, i think it would help the flow.
good job!
luv,
Glory
ps-dont let me forget to send you a slightly reworked Reminiscing. :) cause i totally keep forgetting!

Eep, this gave me chills! *shivers* Ah, so wonderful, all of it. Just beautiful. Tres bien!
~ KDR