I have filled my life up with "What if...", so I can identify this poem.

I like this. The second line makes me think of refusing drugs (Just Say No is a popular tagline for that where I come from). The rest of the poem could easily fit into that theory, but I'm not really sure if I'm on the right track. Anyway, I did like it, it was interesting and I like the way it was presented.

Peace, Daze

really good except i thought haikus were:

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

yours is a 5-6-5

i'm not an expert poet so tell me if i'm wrong