The last two stanzas really caught me and stuck, which is awesome.

Great work and thanks for the reviews and all that jazz.

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I liked this poem! You handle the words perfectly, I have to say. It just flows very nicely.

The ending was perfect; because it's the sad truth, really.

Good work! Keep it up

- Frac

I didn't read it again, but I didn't forget how good it was. Wish I could write like this... Gosh, if only I had your talent...
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