"The warmth; the length of...falling into love." That line was incredibly beautiful! :)

aw the ending is so sad.
I love how it is written..good!

this is fantastic. There are few on this site who can write poetry that expresses feeling without sounding too angsty. This was a gorgeous example of you talent... Keep it up.

ngaw :) third last stanza and 'it is the connection she craves'