This story is perfect! The perfect mix of reality and fantasy, already evident in the first chapter!
Grtz Silencia
ps: you better update fast, fangirls are scary... *shudders*
'Kay so all I have to say is that I love it.
Your characters are all very interesting and the wording has a great flow. The plot also seems rather interesting.
The only problems I have with it are that it's all centered and the fact that it's almost all dialogue... Other than that I don't see anything wrong with it.
DodbC.
P.S. I love your penname, reminds me of Kare Kano.