Oh my goodness. I'm not completely sure I understood that, but it was great. Is it about a baby that's dying? Is it based on a personal experience?

'Eyes newborn' and 'Baby skeleton' were lines with haunting imagery!

"She is barely here, and already slipping away." Very powerful! Sad!

Absolutely beautiful.

Oh, how I wish I was any good at poetry, so that I could say with confidence why exactly I liked this. I suppose it's the calm beat of the whole thing, and the beautiful imagery conjured in my mind.

"corner crawling carpet handprints", "sleep between her ribs", "beautiful incompetence", and many more like that were excellent. I really enjoyed reading this.