I like that you've created such a strong character.

“I quit! And I hope what little ** you have shrivels up and falls off.”

LOL

Nice line.

Nice work with this piece in general thus far. I look forward to seeing what you write next for this. Again, nice work.

Wow.

This is a very powerful start.

Nice work.

yep, sounds like someone I know, Definitely. Great job R. Keep up the story!

very interesting

Oh...more please!