Wow! I don't know if you still read reviews as its been a while since you completed this but this fic is awesome! It has a bit of everything, romance, action and suspense!

The writing is really really good. I love the way you have developed Grady and Luke's characters further, they seem so real as well! I also love the way you depict the ups and downs of their relationship, its all done extremely well. I am off to read your story on Cliff and Berkley please keep up the excellent work!

OMG I love it!! totally enjoyed reading this. There was some parts that were confusing, especially the fight with Robert, after Luke got knocked out. What happen?
I get it up until then, and when Grady wakes up but the in between I'm like huh?
Other than that I LOVE IT. Awsome!

I was gonna harrass you into writing a fic on Berkley and Cliff, totally like the idea of them together, but I see you are already in the process of writing one on them.
AWSOME!
I'm off to read that now :D

Hey. So, after finding two other stories of yours, Between Night and Day and Fiend by the Bay, I checked out your profile when I was bored today narrowing my favourite authors and stories (because, heck - I hardly even liked some of them!) and after reading the two other stories and finding them both to be really good, I read The Cresent Sky and the sequel, Blood Moon, or other part or whatever. And I have to say you are a really good author. Usually a person can write one good novel and that's it, a sort of one-shot deal but I really like your stories and your writing style.

Yay, everything's solved! XD Robert was hella creepy...glad he's gone. I think my favourite character from this was Berkley. Glad things ended well for him. I really enjoyed this ^^ It finished everything off nicely from the first story, and was interesting and dramatic!

i like both stories very much^^ i like how you made the characters people from this day and age and also very real and down to earth. you know usually it'll be like the college students from our parents generation or something but now it comes from ours and i like that very muchXD not to mention all the juicy lemons in there but i feel that yu left some things unfinished...care to continue?XD

Aww gr8 sequal!! hope 4 another!!

awesome story! very good at the end, yet I feel that you left the reader hanging with what happened between Cliff and Berkley a bit. You wrapped things up nicely between Luke and Grady though! So I'll keep my eye on you in hopes for any more awesome stories!

I really like this idea for the sequal. It was a little short though. Any chance of becoming a trilogy? Hint, Hint!

awesome chapter! the transition between scenes was very smooth, so much that I was like, 'wait, what just happened?' but in a good way!

keep up the amazing work, i can't wait to see what comes next! especially between Berkley and Cliff!

wow Berkley...way to be a tool for Cliff to just use...


gr8 chapter! luv the cliffhanger, now we will see how people react!

excellent work! can't wait to see what is in store for these two!

oh... what is it? and what's Luke's beef with Berkeley? Update soon!