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Keskonrix 2008-12-14 . chapter 1
I love how "he" (God, supposedly) at first is perceived as distant, and then becomes more and more real in the speaker's mind, to eventually gift her with exactly the kind of comfort that (as we learn in the penultimate line) she needs. - And I also love how the speaker responds to his deep affection...

Blows my mind how you manage to put such things into words. First poem for a long time to go to my favorites.
Franziska 2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Das Gedicht ist wieder unglaublich melodisch. Am besten gefällt mir “You drop your dearest name for me into my mind”, Das hat etwas Magisches. Auch die überraschende letzte Zeile mit den Tränen ist eindrucksvoll.
marinawings 2008-11-19 . chapter 1
this poem is beautiful. it is so evocative of life and all its heartache... and the joy that comes from the dearest name, "like a little daystar in a meadow." i love that line. excellent.
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