This is a great little piece, well written with a sound grasp at conveying the protagonist's emotions. I think the story would be a terrific one to consider extending, as I found James and his situation both interesting and compelling.

Just a little bit of window dressing for you: In the 4th paragraph, the line "He started when he heard a voice" is repeated twice. There also seems to be a number of repeated sentences in the 6th paragraph, when James encounters Ms. Edith.

Well done, pleasure to read.
Bayden.