wow! heated much damn you wrote that well.. though i feel bad for Danny cause she really likes him and that's just unfair... life sux but Jake is who i feel worse for poor boy never had a chance!

always bee

OMFG!

that's so cute! fnally yeesh... i actually felt like her in that seen and then i felt like him then when they kissed i was her! ahahhahaah u such a god writer! i hate you! lol no i dont! next chapter!

always b.

CHICA! Nice story midget...hahaha

you can't hurt me ova the internet. God bless the net or my ass be fried by now! Talk to you later, xoxoxoxoxoxox P.S i like the storyLOVE the story

Aw My gosh started happy and then ended really sad i just cant believe how much Danny's character has developed it is extraordinary and i think only every few writers are able to do that so congrats i love the relationship Jake has with his family it's really awesome!

don't forget to read my story!

love your dirty dream buddy b. wink wink

dude what is she gonna do?/ come on tell me! and tehy are so cute togethere! lovein it andd ohh and i cant believe her mum is here like wtf why now?

i like it update! like ... noe...no ... noe

u still ahvent updated damn it!

lol

love u b.

Oh. My. God.

I love them all!

Please continue! I really want a happy ending and I love Jake's POV on Danny :)

millie xx

hey hey

where were u today and can i say omfg this was such a good chapter i love this story omg seroiusly this is so good i cant to see what happens ohh but wait when do they sleep togethere? next chapter plz say yes i need to see this inginoiuses and did u edit my story? and u and gloris are my edditior ok? cool love this cahpter hot damjn tell u more later

love u tons bee

hey

i think i should get credit for the word yello thats my way of say hello thank you very much! anyways i like the story are his wings out and OMG sexy bike! hey hey gessue wat at skool some l plater has the awsomes red bike ever and its brand new! how awsome! and anywyas i really like where this is going and it liek crazy! ill see u tommro and u better be there or eles! insert evil laugh! love u tons bee xoxoxoxoxoxo endless

this story sounds funny already amd Ive only read chapter one! I like i like i like, keep writing man or girl, whoever you are!

woop woop!

i love zak sudennly and i could nt care less about jake hey maybe u get zak to hook up with keshia! that be awsome!

anyways keep it going be

luv u!

thats was such a u thing to say about hate oo...a md well it getting better!

bee

hey!

omg thats is such a good chapter i cant believe that im ur pusherr

yaya well we have to do something call me

and ill give u inputs then

love u be xoxoxoxoxo

yo! hey well first merry christmas! and well u have a few gramatical errors in all the chaps but nothing major.. um well i m missing u guys like crazy and its only been a few days! damn girl anyways im not going to brisbane anymore so we can hang out more!) yayayayay well keep up dating LM (little midget) have a good one ...

love u be xoxoxoxo

and P.s i want to talk to u!

Babe! This story is awsome. Write more before i die of extreme boredom. I'm hungry! :P XXTANNER

ohh okay thats heaps cool

chap buddy well when r u gonna update mysterious chester avenue? plez update soon

love u tons and i like danny

but i love keshia

anywaz im supposed to be doin my assignment so plz

update soon

love u tons bee xoxox