Wow, that's a pretty awesome first chapter.
XD

I love how this story is not the 'badboy with bad habbits gets saved by girl' cliché. Just ordinary people with fucked up problems, things that happen everyday and most don't see.
I'm excitted to see where this is going, keep on!

Wow chain, I liked it, but in my opinion, this is the darkest of your works, Save for the Overpass by far. It's extremely dreary and grim, but very well written.

What an original idea...I truly like it and I also like where this is going. ;)