"The epic joy that runs through me is laughable." This opening line is absolutely stunning!

"But happiness is ours, and I'll clutch hope to my chest." A very well-written line!

"For now, we live." BEAUTIFUL!

:)

I like the overall flow of the poem; it's unique!

"I love your happiness,

it's our friendship I mourn."

Excellent final lines! They're full of angst, bitterness, and sadness!

:)

Thank you for the review.

In return I have read your more recent work and

I'm very impressed at the form of imagery you use.

You wrapped this piece up very well with

The last line:

"Watch the meltdown"

Perfection.

wow.

this is painful.

i like it :)

i know where youre coming from.

AMAZING ! :)

Very nice.

Couldn't be assed, I guess.

You're great with metaphors.

you know exactly how im feeling.

strange, but awesome. XD

.. i loved it : D

Painfull.

"You're screaming in riddles

and breaking my heart again."

That got to me.

:) loved it.

holy shit.

this has got to be one of the best pieces i have read in a long time.

i love how i can relate to it.

my favorite collection so far :)

This is simply amazing.

I have no words to describe it.

:)

i had several interpretations for this one,

and could relate to one of them very well.

great job.

the last line struck me.

you have a way with words.