|Reviews for Work It Out|
| Isca 1/23/09 . chapter 12
"The epic joy that runs through me is laughable." This opening line is absolutely stunning!
"But happiness is ours, and I'll clutch hope to my chest." A very well-written line!
"For now, we live." BEAUTIFUL!
| Isca 1/16/09 . chapter 11
I like the overall flow of the poem; it's unique!
"I love your happiness,
it's our friendship I mourn."
Excellent final lines! They're full of angst, bitterness, and sadness!
| HelpMePlease 1/16/09 . chapter 1
Thank you for the review.
In return I have read your more recent work and
I'm very impressed at the form of imagery you use.
You wrapped this piece up very well with
The last line:
"Watch the meltdown"
| softersin 1/5/09 . chapter 10
this is painful.
i like it :)
i know where youre coming from.
| softersin 12/6/08 . chapter 9
AMAZING ! :)
| ode to melancholy 12/4/08 . chapter 8
| ode to melancholy 12/4/08 . chapter 3
Couldn't be assed, I guess.
| ode to melancholy 12/4/08 . chapter 2
You're great with metaphors.
| softersin 12/3/08 . chapter 8
you know exactly how im feeling.
strange, but awesome. XD
.. i loved it : D
| softersin 12/3/08 . chapter 7
| softersin 12/3/08 . chapter 6
"You're screaming in riddles
and breaking my heart again."
That got to me.
:) loved it.
| softersin 11/21/08 . chapter 5
this has got to be one of the best pieces i have read in a long time.
i love how i can relate to it.
my favorite collection so far :)
| softersin 11/21/08 . chapter 4
This is simply amazing.
I have no words to describe it.
| softersin 11/21/08 . chapter 2
i had several interpretations for this one,
and could relate to one of them very well.
| softersin 11/21/08 . chapter 1
the last line struck me.
you have a way with words.