Cr...epy... Good imagery. I like the good description of everything. Good use of how children are creepy as demons because their innocence is supposed... to keep them pure =)

Perhaps a rhyme scheme is a missing part but I can see how that can be really hard to do... and im just really big on stuff like that haha. But it flows where. I would imagine if you tried to rhyme it even though it flows well, the rhymes would be forced and the flow might be a bit... disrupted.

And the quick transition at the end though, from a demon to thanking God... It seems like it could've been paced a little more like with a sigh of relief or something and she realizes more it was nothing. Then the demon from hell perhaps?

I still liked it though! Don't take my crits too seriously... I Am but a lowly writer XD