|Reviews for You're Indecent|
| The Concept of Breathing 12/14/08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was beautiful. Really, really beautiful.
I liked that last stanza the most. amazing.
-the concept of breathing
| K. Molle 11/22/08 . chapter 1
what a very wide vocab you have...a lot bigger than mine. They way you embedded big words into your writing worked very well, so write more good stuff!
| fictionalxbliss 11/22/08 . chapter 1
Woah, again. Have you ever thought of getting published? Have you been published?
Because this is amazing. You should look into it. Soon.
| Paperclippe 11/20/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful, lush language. Very nice.