   Lesumi 2009-02-07 . chapter 11*watches* |
 B 2009-01-20 . chapter 11 Does Sariel come across as a typical angel - white wings, halo or different? Please clarify. |
| B 2009-01-20 . chapter 10 Did they get married or not? It's confusing. |
| B 2009-01-20 . chapter 8 The last line, '“Imagine Christ blessing homosexual pornography!”' seems a bit redundant. It doesn't fit particularly with the theme or atmosphere of the rest of the chapter. |
| B 2009-01-20 . chapter 6 Pandora seems insincere and undecided regarding her feelings toward the angel. Possibly clarify? |
| B 2009-01-20 . chapter 2 Black charred wings?Are they leather or burned feathers of skin and bone? |
| B 2009-01-20 . chapter 1 I suggest a soundtrack to this story. |
 MsQueenOfTheWorld 2009-01-19 . chapter 12Oh no! She can't die. It was getting oh so interesting. :o |
 predict.this 2009-01-16 . chapter 12NO! Poor Pandora. The poor baby, is it gone? O_O |
| candles in the snow 2009-01-13 . chapter 11 Wow, great story! I can't wait to read more! |
| predict.this 2009-01-12 . chapter 11 Oh no! Mammon's right! Pandora's not so tough when Sariel's not around! Uh-oh. How's she going to save herself this time? |
| MsQueenOfTheWorld 2009-01-12 . chapter 9 Wow. This story has had a lot of unexpected twist. When I read the first chapter, I didn't think any of this was going to happen. Bravo for an uncliche type story. :) |
| predict.this 2009-01-08 . chapter 9 I can't wait to see what Sariel will do! XD Pandora blind. Hm... |
 Carlotta Lynn 2009-01-07 . chapter 9A freak on acid.. I guess that's how you can put it. lol
yet another lovely chapter. thank you for the update. can't wait for more! |
| predict.this 2008-12-21 . chapter 8 Wow, so Sariel is actually more powerful than Pandora? I thought that their powers will be on par. |
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