I enjoy this story. I'm surprised no one has yet reviewed. I like the plot, it's very interesting. The only thing I am suggesting is that you review it a little bit better before you publish. There are a few words that are improperly spelled and used out of context, and there are some issues with punctuation. Other than that, I'm impressed. Keep up the good work, luv. :)If you want any help with that kind of stuff, you don't need to, but you're welcome to e-mail me or IM me. My IM is CarcinogenicRose, and my e-mail is angelamy@rochester.. Continue writing! :)