god, so much emotion in this. it reminds me of an organized rant, and your imagery is so so beautiful in this

"i keep screaming for redemption, but there is no one to hear me but the frozen sky of impending december." definitely my favorite sentence, and the ending is powerful in a simple but profound way

excellent poem

and thanks for your review :]

you're better than you think you are. Just the fact that you can feel so much and put words for them and make me read from start to the end. this is lovely.

For some reason, the line "i'm too angry to breathe" struck me as the best line i've seen in a long while. usually it's 'i'm too sad/depressed/not wanting/scared/etc. to breathe" but the i'm too ANGRY to breathe is something new, which i like. of course, there are also the other fantastics- "melting plastic smiles"//"horizon fractures cleanly". great concept. just a suggestion, i think the "but i suspect you're already not listening" would work better on the next line, or even another stanza. btw-
(thanks for the reviews)

"Bleeding with an honesty..." Beautiful! Haunting!

"I have no voice for the things I need to say." Very powerful and profound!