Very touching poem! The words you use well describe the pain and isolation we have all felt at some point in our lives. Wonderful job as always!

An interesting poem...not bad. really dramatic, but that's a good thing! ...

I know rhe feel I love your style the way the words flow it great. I can relate as well .I wish I could just let it bleed let everyone else know that im hurting. but that won't happen any time soon

the lines "i call out but no one hears, i fall to my knees but no one comes" that's how i feel sometimes. kind of hopeless like no one listens to me, so i can relate. it was great. Thanx