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Reviews For: Unfortunate Savior Complex
simpleplan13 2008-12-04 . chapter 1
I really love your descriptions here, they are very unique and beautiful. I especially like the personification of morning and the phrase "iglooed trust." The alliteration in the last line was interesting as well. The only thing is those really two long lines seemed a bit out of place. Still really great job.
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