"Hunting down silence like an enemy." Chilling!

"I needed a Saviour like you." Aww! That's such a beautiful sentiment! :)

Amazing piece. You really managed to use formatting to exactly capture the feelings and emphasise all the necessary places.

The whole piece is just wow. Very eloquent and easy to read/touching/powerful/etc.

Well done.

I can feel the emotion radiating off of this. I absolutely loved it. Loved the descriptions, the formatting, the word choice. All together they meshed and made the flow impeccable. It could've been cheesy and a "rollmyeyesbutsmilepolitely" type of piece but the way you wrote it moved it the far, far away from that. The writing style you have is perfectly fit for this type of writing. I don't know how to explain but it really adds to the piece and gives it that "oomph". Nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

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