First up shouldn't this be on the fanfiction site?

Anyway, I love how you've managed to demonstrate love, unrequited true love. =D A job well done!

gulistanlik

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LOVE it.

Wow, that was awesome. I could truly believe this was written from Tinkerbell's point of view. It was sad at the end, since Peter actually grew up.

I love this line: Pixies are so small that we only have enough room in our tiny bodies for one emotion at a time, but I swear that just then I was feeling two.

Kudos to you for a great piece of work.