|Reviews for Emotions|
| simpleplan13 11/30/08 . chapter 1
You change tenses quite a bit here. I would work on that. Otherwise it's an interesting piece. Very relateable and understandable, but the descriptions are different, which is nice. I honestly, don't really like that last stanza. I would leave it just as the first part (less repetitive), but maybe that's just me.
| Seven Rose 11/23/08 . chapter 1
There were some parts I liked,
"It has come to my heart,
To the very deep core:
Knocking at my door.
What should I do?"
was very nice.
I was very confused about the dragon though.
At first it's inside, then it is knocking at your door to go in?