This is so sweet. i loved the line,

"‘cause you’re dancing in sunbeams"

Aw, how sweet. I like how this piece has emotion but it wasn't the "gushingfromeverypore" type. It was subtle but sweet. Also, the fact that it's a lullaby [or atleast it sounds like one] just makes the writing better. This type of writing is suited for a song to put babies to sleep. Nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

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This is beautiful. I love it.

aww... cute

Narq.

Aww, this is so sweet. :)