and oh my god, it's got more chapters!
(i'm not usually this inept...)
and dear god, your IMAGERY.
fantastic.

oh behalf of america, i thank you. :P
and this piece...it's mind-blowing.
the depth and insight and all-around tragedy..
it's so absolutely powerful.
superb, superb job.

I'm sorry I didn't review this sooner! I was on vacation when you posted it and didn't have much time when I got home, but I even printed it out and everything so I could read it.

this is so foreboding, but with light underneath it, if that even makes sense. it's so dark but it's not dead, I feel like it was coming to a point, but then it ended! haha, it's okay though. it's lovely even on its own. I adore this.

this is amazing, as usual

ted hughes is amazing :)

believe it or not, I finished a novel when I was 13. I started November 1st and finished on my 14th birthday [march 11th.] it was only 61K words though, and if it's any consolation, i've started 4 novels since and not finished a single one.

this is so atmospheric. this could be one of the best descriptions I've ever read of a woman. flawless as always.

that ending gave me so many chills that I got cold. it's funny because this is less colorful than your other pieces. it's dead and empty but your writing is still so perfect- it's probably one of my favorite things you've done. [other than 'the sky explodes and only you know' -- I have to tell you, I miss that one a lot. really a lot.]

why are you so amazing? your words fit together so perfectly, it makes me want to read it over and over again.

and as for the novel question: hah! the closest i've got to finishing a novel was when i was seven and i was writing about the adventures of my nana's cat and dog (they had super powers)