I really like how the crowdedness of the words help associate your poem's meaning! You reviewed one of my poems before so after lik 3 years, I'm finally looking through all the reviews. Thanks!

stunning. :)

damn it, you're amazing.

really, really, really.

[and anything more i could say would miminise the raw power of this, so i'm going to cut it off here, add this to my favourites, and reread it.]

"The trees do not stir." Chilling!

"My veins have cried enough." Emotionally vivid.