|Reviews for What can i do to set me free?|
| pennhead17 11/24/08 . chapter 1
i liked it i can relate!
| scarlet stars 11/24/08 . chapter 1
Nice poem, it has a lot of potential. One question-isn't love eternal? If you are saying that you are only acting fake, don't use a cliche phrase like "only skin deep". Perhaps, "happiness seems to only be a facade" or "deceptive appearance". I like the 3 lines about breaking the rules...they present a very good question (one which you should discover for yourself!)