I like how this looks, like, visually, and I like their names and sort of the feeling of the whole thing. I think it would be nice if the first few lines were more specific, and grounded, but that's just me.

Do you go to bournside? I think I recognise your name from school...

Anyways, cool story (Y). I do Eng Lit & Lang - we dont do anything fun like this its all like 'read this, write that, suck this'. bah.

that was very...interesting...

horray for randomness!