I like it. Like you said, it's upbeat and (and I REALLY hope you don't take offense to this part, because I do not mean it in an offensive way AT ALL), but kind of like something the Jonas Brothers or Demi Lovato would perform. Again, I hope you don't hate me for that part, because I actually like them, but I realize that most people think their lyrics are too simplistic. I don't have any problems with simplicity though. XD

Anyway, I'm done with my tangent. Overall, great song, and I love how you spaced it and everything. The inner song-reading nerd in me was very pleased.