 Jacob 2009-04-16 . chapter 3 I really liked the way the ending was written. I know that it isn't very extravagant but instead very simple and I don't know why but I enjoyed reading the entire story but especially liked the ending, well how it was written. Keep writing! |
 Glittery Bubbles 2009-03-30 . chapter 2 I quite like this story. It's sad, but kind of the good kind. Even when all seems hopeless, the way you write it makes it seem like there is hope in the future for all these lonely hearts (and one who claims not to be). I really hope you continue with this one. It seems a shame to leave these characters stranded in their misery. :) |
 sarah loves charts. 2009-01-11 . chapter 2John's story was absolutely heartbreaking. There were actually tears in my eyes, something which rarely happens when I'm reading. Good job with this. |
 sarah loves charts. 2008-11-25 . chapter 1Very nice.
Charlie's story was so sad, but I loved how open he was about it. He wasn't touchy, or easily offended. It was refreshing. It shows what kind of person he is.
Very interested to see more. :) |