I agree with 'Mikey', the first lines gives too much... but... it's a haiku, ain't it?

I loved the simple feel of this poem. Even though you put it as angst, you kept those feelings subtle. That's great because it really under plays the emotion and makes it come through even clearer.

I would recommend changing the first line, it kind of spells out the poem too clearly. But that's probably just me ;)

Beautiful work! Keep writing!

wow, I like the last line.
it's a very good poem.