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lailaaa 2009-10-06 . chapter 1
emos would take that as a kind of offence
i'm telling you nicely...
i'm guessing you don't know what goes on in their mind, but PELASE don't question it. I know it's not a good thing they do, but... this just doesn't seem right.
In Midnight Blue 2009-01-08 . chapter 1
awesome job

i agree with the other other review on here...
mikey magee 2008-11-26 . chapter 1
I'v never been much for haikus, but I think you pulled this one off nicely. It deals with issues in a way thats so simple and new, it makes the poem all the better.
"Whats so special?" This last line made the entire haiku for me. It shows a sense of detachment that (at least to me) speaks to the people who slit their wrists and cry and says "you don't have as big as problems as you believe."
whats even better is that you conveyed all of that in just three lines. Not an easy task, but very well done!

Keep on writing and you'll reach your dream someday!
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