 mikey magee 2008-11-26 . chapter 1I'v never been much for haikus, but I think you pulled this one off nicely. It deals with issues in a way thats so simple and new, it makes the poem all the better.
"Whats so special?" This last line made the entire haiku for me. It shows a sense of detachment that (at least to me) speaks to the people who slit their wrists and cry and says "you don't have as big as problems as you believe."
whats even better is that you conveyed all of that in just three lines. Not an easy task, but very well done!
Keep on writing and you'll reach your dream someday! |