This was really good. It reminded me of NYC standing on the Hudson in South Manhattan. I could feel the freezing, stinging water. I love cold and this is the perfect example of why I enjoy it so much.

:O I love this poem , It has a great rhythm and is very sort of..Strong. If you understand. x.x

Beautiful!

I love the beautiful imagery you create here- I could almost taste the salty water and feel the gusts along with the poem's speaker. There is a very eternal and calm feeling which just emanates from your words. Overall, sensual and and captivating :)

This is beautiful. Very calming, relaxing. Great job! _

I love the wild imagery here :)

Wonderful!

Truly lovely poetry. :)

lovely imageryi love especially the last two lines

It's very vivid and I can feel/imagine it all. Nce job!

I've never seen the ocean though I've heard and smelled it in my dreams, but its always stormy. A good simple one this, and I found no mistakes in it. I recommend you listen to "Morning Sun" by Savatage (they are known as Trans Siberian Orchestra now).

You are such an amazing writer! Probably one of the best on here. I loved this one just as much as I loved your shadow one. This one leaves me in such a calm mood, I feel like I'm right there in the wind by the water.

I just recently posted 2 stories and I'd love if you could read and review them. Feedback from an author like you would mean the world.

wow.

such a pretty poem.

I like it alot.

Karrah

I like the repetition of the first sentenence on all the stanzas, it gave a feeling that you are certianly on task and know what you are doing.

Narq.

ah, i love this, i can relate to the emotions.

as i said, I've always been a child of the ocean.

I like this poem, it transports me to a very real place and mood in just a few lines. The last line of the third stanza makes me think about how people perceive their relationship with nature in different ways. I like how the final stanza makes the poem – the place and mood you’ve created - continue even after the words have ceased.

lovely imagery. don't you just love the mood the water inspires?

keep writing