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Soen22 2008-12-30 . chapter 1
That was cute, I love love haiku, it's the type of structure I can actually write, hah. I loved the last line, it made me giggle. I really liked this because it was so bubbly.
-Emmi
dragonflydreamer 2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Haha, nice little piece. It got a chuckle out of me :)

I've seen a lot of poems like this, but I like your last line. It makes this unique and gives it a bit of personality.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
maryallen/Ooh!KITTY!! 2008-12-22 . chapter 1
ahahahahahahahaaha. Merry Christmas! luv the haiku. mum is agitated and... Edward Cullen is comin to town!lol bye!
Ooh! look! a kitty! must...chase... cute...fluffy...kitty!
maryallen 2008-12-20 . chapter 1
lol. heheheheheheheheheheh short...(like me)and to the point.
muffins4coffee 2008-11-28 . chapter 1
Fun!
Oddly, whenever i write a Haiku, i never only write one stanza, hm... Bit i like it this way. It's more punctuated!
mylittlefirefly 2008-11-26 . chapter 1
Cute, indeed. :) Nice job! -mit
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