 Soen22 2008-12-30 . chapter 1That was cute, I love love haiku, it's the type of structure I can actually write, hah. I loved the last line, it made me giggle. I really liked this because it was so bubbly.
-Emmi |
 dragonflydreamer 2008-12-27 . chapter 1Haha, nice little piece. It got a chuckle out of me :)
I've seen a lot of poems like this, but I like your last line. It makes this unique and gives it a bit of personality.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile) |
 maryallen/Ooh!KITTY!! 2008-12-22 . chapter 1 ahahahahahahahaaha. Merry Christmas! luv the haiku. mum is agitated and... Edward Cullen is comin to town!lol bye!
Ooh! look! a kitty! must...chase... cute...fluffy...kitty! |
 maryallen 2008-12-20 . chapter 1 lol. heheheheheheheheheheh short...(like me)and to the point. |
 muffins4coffee 2008-11-28 . chapter 1Fun!
Oddly, whenever i write a Haiku, i never only write one stanza, hm... Bit i like it this way. It's more punctuated! |
 mylittlefirefly 2008-11-26 . chapter 1Cute, indeed. :) Nice job! -mit |