*Sniffle* That was really beautiful. :D The whole imagery of the poem was amazing! Really reminds me of what I want and love to do on summer days. It's really makes me hopeful for Jesus' return.

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My favorite line? "At least He gives me lots of peppermints, gnarled trees, soft grass, and warm summer days to pass the time till His return." Okay, maybe it was like the whole stanza, but that was really the kicker and highlight of the poem for me. Greatest line ever(In my opinion). Do you think you'd be okay with letting me use that as my fave quote? Because it really is a wonderful line, honest.

Good poem! I liked it! It was a very interesting way to remind everyone of Christ's return. Keep writing for Him!

Jesus Kid

Lovely poem. I'm really not sure how to review poems, but the first few lines were very descriptive and sensory, and the best part. :)

Very sweet.